Do the characters designs in the fan comic/au suck?

I am going to be redesigning some of the characters but before I do that (again), I wanna know what you guys think of current designs in the au/fan comic.

(Not all characters designs are changing btw)

I did change some things for the fan comic, Otis will not be the third protagonist anymore, and will be replaced by Nene. The reasons is because Nene fits more and it makes a lot of sense due to the fact Convict is one of the villains in the later chapters. But don't worry! Otis will still be in the fan comic!

Since this is a work in progress, some things may change when the fan comic is more complete.

There are four protagonists: Pico, Nene, Boyfriend, and Girlfriend. (Depending on the chapters, is who's point of view we will be mainly focusing on) The fan comic has eight chapters and each chapter brings in a new villain. Some chapters take place in a different season each (except chapter one, three, five, seven). I will only be explaining chapter one and two! (The only reason I am explaining chapter one and two is because I haven't finish writing the other chapters, when I do finish the other chapters I will make another news post and tell you more on the other chapters! :3)

Chapter one: Boyfriend had finally finished building his "awesome" metal circus and wanted to show everyone he knows! But things start to go wrong when someone named Tina Alvin comes in and tries to shut the circus down due to it being a health risk to everyone, and having monkeys there. Boyfriend not knowing what to do, goes to Pico and asks for his help. Pico helps Boyfriend make sure the circus doesn't get shut down, but it turns out this would be something he will deeply regret forever.

Chapter two: Weird things start to happen over the past month, people are going missing, Boyfriend is acting a lot weirder than normal, but things get worse when Pico and his friends find out about what's underneath the circus

I am going to post something that will explain what my Pico's school/fnf fan comic is about on Tumblr first then I will post it here too. Why? Because..... I don't know, I am just really bored and wanted to do something really weird and new lol.

Sorry if my grammar or wording is really bad right now, I am really stressed because of so much anxiety and I really just wanna draw something to calm down-

You guys remember this art?

And you know the person in it that has hair red?

Well it's time to tell you guys about this character....

THAT'S A GUY-

So you know that Pico's school/fnf fan comic I am making and how it was going to have Tricky in it?

Yeah, about that..... Tricky's getting removed from the story. I don't think I can fit Tricky in the story anymore,

BACK THEN when the story was REALLY different, Tricky was very needed for the story and I could fit Tricky in just fine at the time.

I can maybe add a reference to Tricky in the fan comic still

I know I said that this will be the last drawing

but I wanna post one more drawing on newgrounds lol.

I will start posting art again when I finish chapter one of the pico's school/fnf fan comic

(Originally I was gonna post art again on newgrounds when I finish all chapters but that will take way too long and I think waiting til chapter one is finish is better)

 You're not getting ANY context!

Remember that time when I made a fan design of Bf's mom?

I just now noticed that I forgot to mention her name,

Her name is Mizuki.

Like two or three alts lmao (Btw this has huge spoilers for the fan comic)

Also it kinda has blood and also the bottom is flashing on loop

But anyways, here's the two alts lol

non loop version:

Loop version:

I am going to be renaming the Pico's school/fnf fan comic from Seasons au/Ng seasons au to something else, I just don't really like the name anymore and I wanna change it! Though, I'm not sure what to change the name to.